To begin with , people like to believe in rumors.I have witnessed that many people fall prey of rumors. They believe easy in them and they don't have to think about reading or searching for them,but they believe what the others say.Most of the people believe in president Obama.Everything he says it is significant for them,but in reality a lot of promises and nothing is true nothing happened. [notice how you moved from "rumors" to "promises" here--be careful not to change the topic] During his presidential camping in 2008 Barack Obama pledged ,to bring back the jobs lost in 2007 and 2008 and to fix the economic problems.Even thought people still lose the jobs on the other hand they still believe in false promises that they will get their jobs soon.They want to believe this rumor because the reality hurt them. This problem needs to be solved as soon as possible. The faster they get jobs the less they will suffer and less problems they will have. People should stop thinking and believing in this rumor but to think about reality and how to solve this problem.
Not do people believe in rumors but also they tend to be stubborn and have strong ego.As the article states "none of us like being told we're wrong" "which was backed up by studies proving people stick to their own beliefs even strong when shown data that opposes theirs . In the 2008 Election spreaded rumors that President Barack Obama is a Muslim. Even thought he says is a Christian and was raise from christian parent and believe in God.Most people find this uncertainty.Obama unusual middle name Hussein which unfortunately for the senator happens to be the name of the famous Iraqi dictator.Some people wonder why does a Christian have a middle name of Islamic background. Even though they listened before about Obama's religion people still think that President Obama is a Muslim.People tend to believe rumors that agree with their own point of view and stick with the idea sometimes they don't care about hurt and damage to e personal reputation.People should stick and believe with real fact. [good attempt at the sandwich paragraph--keep this up]
Finally when people faced a truth they fall into denial. People sometimes believe strongly in something and when faced with a contradicting truth they fall into denial. As the article show us the debate over the supposed planned mosque at "Ground Zero" This show us how this false beliefs stick in peoples brain's. [needs further development--how is the "mosque" a type of "denial"?]
In conclusion I want to emphasize that people still believe in rumors in untrue stories which can be harm and can stick in their minds. People should avoid these rumors and they should thinking right before speaking,because rumors even thought are not important can hurt.
2 comments:
Not bad, nartiote4, not bad. The whole was relatively easy to read, and you definitely are getting the idea of what kind of essay is needed.
Notice: you tend to move slightly off topic (this happened in both the first and last body paragraph). Make sure you either a) stick to the subject or b) connect your topic to the topic of the reading (rumors to promises, for example).
I wasn't sure. I was confused . Thank you .
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