In “I Know the
Truth, So Don’t Bother Me with Facts,” Jeffrey Kluger claim that
most people do not want to change their belief once they accepted
them even though they are provided with the facts. People are easily
fooled by giving them untrue story or completely wrong information.
There fore, Ohio State University of assistant professors of
communication R.Kelly Garrett and Erik Nisbet research to estimate
how much they seriously believe on false information, and how much
their standpoints will change when they are being made visible to the
facts of the cases. It comes out with [It turns out that] people can be easily influenced
with “insinuating picture or inflammatory quotes ,” on the other
hand only a few people are willing to change their opinions when they
know the truth. More over, most of the people are extremely attached
with their biases when they are being told they are wrong. Jeffrey
Kluger is right when he states that we dont want to believe others
than our belief because of our high expection and fear of losing our
possessions.
When people are in
troubles they stick to the wrong thing as their hopes, and they dont
even want to listen professional advices. Mostly people are want to
get back healthy lives while they are in sickness, so they will find
a way to maintain their health in different ways by taking medicine
or doing physical activities. Some of the greedy people are taking
advantages from this weakness by providing them expensive
ineffective medicine. Recently I read an article from my country
which is the advertisements sold a dietary supplement as a perfect
medicine that will cure every dieases including cancer. Therefore,
most of the cancer patients stopped getting the chemotheraphy, and
fully depended on that supplement. Eventhough their doctors explained
them detail about the side effect of that dietary supplement, the
patients did not listen and keep beliveing in their wrong
informations. As a result, they had to give up their hopes early.
Futher more, we are not only being
happy of winning all the time, but also afraid of losing our
possessions. Mostly banks will be get in trouble when clients become
doubt on them, and also that doubt can lead the banks to be shut
down. Once it was happened to Asia Da Na bank from my country, at
that time there were rumors about that bank was in a bad shape and it
would nearly bankrupt. In reality,they lent a lot of money to small
businesses, and different companies and they are running the business
smoothly. However, they are doing in good jobs when the clients
doubts were raising and withdrew their money back, that bank got into
troubles. Because most of their clients money were lent with
agreements to other businesses, they couldn't ask them back
immediately. At first the bank didn't want to file a bankruptcy, so
they tried to perusade their clients in different ways [such as] as offering
high percentage of saving rates to avoid taking money back from them.
Eventhough they tried to satisfy their client by selling their
properties and gave back their money, when there were a lot of demand
and they couldn't handle that situation. At last, they had to file a
bankruptcy, and shut down their bank.
Summing up, people are easily to
believe in rumors and that rumor can give disadvatage to our society.
So, before we belive on something we have to make sure where that
information come from inorder to prevent unexpected events happening.
1 comment:
You prove here that you understand how essays work. Good job.
What we need to work on now:
1. Connecting and referring back to the reading in your body paragraphs.
2. Proofreading your final draft. Here you have several mistakes that you could have fixed if you had proofread the post carefully.
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