Monday, March 10, 2014

Blog2. hype revise

   Blog2   

           In the article,"Hype", Kalle Lasn states that a lot of advertisements in america have negative effect on people. numerous commercials come out everywhere they go, even if they don't want ads. tey can't escape from ads.i agree with author because people can't rest their time form tons of ads, and that ads cause reason of stresses.
          people want to take their times ,and they don't want to any interupts when they calm down. However, their times receive invasion from numerous ads. Author says, " There is nowhere to run."  It means that people can't take thier times away from ads. Too much is as bad as too little. it makes people get stress. Even people can see ads in public restrooms, when they are in front of urinal. they can't spent their time away from commercials.
          For example, when I was alone, i usually enjoy watching movie in my home. Last week, I watched Korean movie in OCN. Before starting movie, I spent more than 10 minutes to watch ads. After starting movie, I concentratd to watch that. Suddenly, screen changed and came out ads, even though movie wasn't finished. I waited five ads, and i could watch movie again, but it happened again after 40 minutes. I couldn't concentrate to watch movie. I got a stress, and stop to watching movie. that commercial pollution floods interupt me to my break time.
       in conclusion, people have to need their times from everything that they don;t want. however, they recieve invasion their times from tons of ads. it will be negative effect on people.

1 comment:

Doctor X said...

How much did you revise your original draft? I am asking because this piece only expands one idea with one example...